As we all know, thanksgiving is drawing ever closer. This time on blogger, I decided* to reflect on what I am thankful for.
I am thankful for many things, such as my friends and family. I am thankful for my mom and dad because they take care of me, and they do a good job of it. My little brother Alex is another thing I'm thankfull for, because without him, I wouldn't have anybody to completely pulverise in pillow fights.
I am also thankfull for my friends Zachary and Akash. I am thankfull that they are my friends, because Zack and I share a lot of interests and really understand each other, and Akash is the mushroom, or the "fungi".
Nice job. I really got a feel for what you are thankful for. You could improve it by not including that first paragraph. Overall, nice job.
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