Parents often don’t allow their child to keep a pet, and simply because the child is too young. Even if the kid cries and begs and pleads, some parents just say “You’re not responsible enough to take care of a pet.” But that isn’t a problem with Amazing Pet Chubs! Pet chubs are cute and funny, and they are also easy to take care of, so they will appeal to both children and their parents. Chubs are completely child safe, and they will make any kid laugh after a hard day. Amazing Pet Chubs are the type of pet that will please everyone!
Chubs are easy to take care of, because they only need to be fed once a week. If their owner still forgets to feed them, they will make little “meep meep” sounds to remind them that they have pets to feed. About 50 percent of all pets are obese. Pet chubs do not get obese, because they only eat as much as they need to stay healthy. Chubs also do not require their their habitat to be cleaned, because they do not extrude waste. These easy things a child has to do to care for pet chubs will start them on a path of responsibility. Other pets might prove too challenging, and the child may stop taking care of the pet, leaving their parents with the long-term commitment of caring for a pet. Many parents worry about their child’s safety when buying a pet, but this won’t be a problem with Amazing Pet Chubs! Pet chubs will not try to get under a child’s clothing or inside their ears or nose, like some nose-licking dogs, because they prefer to ride around on a child’s shoulder, where they feel most safe. If a child squeezes their pet chub too hard, they won’t cause any harm to the chub, like with other small pets like hamsters or birds. If an accident happens and a pet chub is swallowed, the pet chub will not cause any internal harm to the child, because chubs will be broken down into normal waste material once they enter the stomach and are digested. But pet chub’s most alluring quality is that they can make any child happy after a rough day. Pet chubs naturally give off a sweet-smelling scent which will relax a person’s mind when they walk into the room. When they notice the person walk in, the chubs will softly “coo, coo”, drawing the person closer. Then, they will suddenly unfurl their acrobatic talents and do all kinds of tricks until the person is laughing so hard that the tank walls are shaking. Pet chubs have the ability to cheer up everyone, even a person who has had an extra-unhappy day. Chubs are easy to take care of, they are child safe, and their hilarious antics will cheer anyone up: what else could a pet owner to be ask for? The Amazing Pet Chubs will appeal to both children and their parents. The only people who don’t like chubs are the type of people who do not like cute little pets: and who doesn’t like cute small pets?
Great job Alisa! I liked how you listed specifically what pet Chubs can do. It was a great post, and doesn't require any corrections- but you may want to seperate the body paragraphs. Anyway, this was one of the best posts yet.
ReplyDeleteNice post, alisa. I was intrigued (If i had spelled that wrong, sorry I do not know the correct spelling.) by your work on this post. I was very related to this topic because of the collage of chubs youve created on my papers and Mrs. Tchorz's white board. Chubs seem to be very cute and this post claims and proves they are. I am sure the consumers will love it.
ReplyDeleteGood job Alisa. It was a nice although a little redundent at times. Chubs seem to be a big part of your life, and it's cool that you found a way to work that into English. You had a couple technical mistakes. It looked like you started a counter-arguement and then decided you didn't like it and went to a new one, but forgot to erase it. I'm not sure if that was intetional. Overall you did a pretty good job. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteNice post, Alisa. I really liked how you made a quote of what a parent might say to their child. You also said it appeals to consumers of all ages, which I included in my boardroom essay, too. One way you can improve this post is by fixing a few minor mistakes in the paragraphs. In one of them you just added a few extra spaces. Overall, this was another good post. Great job!
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